Alright, so I believe I finally worked out the concepts, characters, and plot. Today, I started editing and revising chapter one of Lust. Took about an hour and 15 minutes to fix grammar (as much as I could) and formatting issues. I cut out the first four paragraphs, but I believe it’s more interesting and works better now. I added more dialogue and try to “show” more than “tell.” I was really entertained and focused with the chapter, so hopefully that translate to the readers.
This is going to be a dark series and isn’t going to be as inspirational or along the Christian Fiction elements I was going for. However, there is still an influence from the Christian motifs and maybe this could be the start of dark Christian fiction, if such a thing is possible.
I’m going to shoot for editing and revising chapter 2, which is actually a new chapter to introduce Theo Williams, before he meets up with Robert Walder. I broke Chapter one into two separate chapters. The second part is now chapter 10, the original chapter 2 ins now chapter 11.
That’s all for now. I have to go take a drawing break.
Until next time,